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First time I've done this before so go easy on me :3
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You looked around, nothing was close to what it looked like at your house.. All there was were hummingbirds and eggs.. Everywhere. A voice in your head told you  not to touch anything, but you couldn't resist the colored chocolate eggs and feathers. You were always the creative one at your school and in your family. You started to craft things with the feathers and placed an egg at the top. You were suck in this jungle cove. There was no possible way to climb it, because of your sprained ankle. You were running laps as you got run into by someone, you had forgotten about that pain, but when you started to walk you could feel it. So you sat on the grassy ground and looked around, you smiled. You were a loner most of the time, because you didn't like the things girls at you school did. You had gotten used to it and liked being alone. You're eyes started to soften as you saw a lick of golden sand cross your face. You drifted into a deep sleep and dreamed about home, but there was no one at home, or anyone around, you started to forget your parents faces, and your friends.
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You woke in a room, there were cookies on the nightstand along with warm milk. You grew suspicious and realized that someone moved behind you. You jumped out of the bed you slept in as you saw nothing was there. "Well i'm going insane..." you thought to yourself, the door of the room opened slightly "Are you okay in this room?" you heard a voice say "I'd like to SEE what's going on." you said, not realizing that it wasn't your mind that asked you. "Well come with me, we'll go see your father." you turned to the door quickly "First, you need to change out of those muddy clothes." you heard the voice say, it was a girl. "Oh! I'm Kathrine. North's daughter." she greeted you with a warm smile. She walked toward a drawer and took out clothes that matched Santa's colors. You realized, it was going to be awhile before you meet your "dad."
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Katherine shoved different types of clothes in your face, you didn't mind, but you didn't like how low cut the shirts were or how short some of the skirts were. "E-excuse me, Katherine..?" you tried to ask under piles of clothes. "Yes?" she smiled innocently, you never liked to be rude so you couldn't bring yourself to say anything "Can you pick something out? I'm not really used to..the customs here." you sighed as Katherine shrieked in a "Eee!" manor. You turned to the window as you heard her say "I'm going to make you look so cute!" you looked at yourself and saw that Katherine really was helping you, your shirt was ripped and covered in dried mud, as your pants were cut up to your knees. You started to think about everything before, and memories of family. But you couldn't, as if an eraser swept words from a pencil off of your pages. You rubbed your neck awkwardly as Katherine popped behind you "IT'S PERFECT! LOOK!" You did as she said and looked at the clothing she picked from the messy piles. It was Winter-like.. a short skirt with snowflakes in-bordering it and a long-sleeved shirt, with white fur at the ends. You liked blue, but you liked black and red even more.

You asked Katherine if there was any black in clothing but she quickly shook her head "Around here... We don't wear... Black.. at all.." You wondered, but you assumed that since Katherine was wearing red, it meant something. You stared at the clothes "Why blue..." You thought to yourself. Katherine walked out of the room as you got ready, you put on the clothes Katherine picked out, the skirt was short, but at least you don't have to walk around with an even shorter one. You put on furry brown boots that covered most of your legs, which is better considering the skirt. Katherine walked back into the room after you told her you were done. She brushed your hair and turned it into a long braid, but you un-tied it and said you liked your hair down. You always did have beautiful hair, according to.. Well, you couldn't quite place who said it, but you shook it off.

Katherine lead you out of the room as she told a yeti to clean the mess, the yeti banged it's head to a wall as Katherine rushed you "Okay lets go.. Before he starts yelling in Russian.." she giggled as you both came into a large workshop, you couldn't help but smile and examine the craft-work of the yetis' and paintings. Katherine burst a door open as a flying ice-sculpture shattered, a large man with a beard crossed his arms. "How many times have I told you to knock Katherine?" his voice sounded warm, even though the sculpture was shattered... You tried to back away and get a closer look of the ice sculpture, it wasn't broken too badly, just the back of the train. You grabbed a near-by screw and picked out the broken parts, just making the last chariot smaller. North smiled and placed his arm on your shoulder, "Would you like to meet your dad, little one?" you weren't little, but you understood who he was, so you nodded. North and Katherine guided you to a globe, as a hummingbird figure, a shadowy figure, and a rabbit-like figure stood. The shadow figure nodded once at you, showing respect and elegance. He was okay, but you sensed something about him that wasn't friendly. The hummingbird quickly opened your mouth and looked at your teeth, she smiled and giggled as she looked at the condition of how nice they were.

Then you walked over to the rabbit curiously, you knew who this was. "How many eggs can you make in a minute?" you asked eagerly as the rabbit smiled. North looked around "Where is Sandy?" he said as Katherine added that "Jack" was gone too. You grew curious as to who "Jack" was. North told you and Katherine to go look for them outside, you worried about how cold it was outside, but Katherine said that you'd be able to find them quickly. Yetis' opened the door to the outside coldness, wind licked your neck like a excited puppy as it spiraled around you like a shark. You smiled, you liked the wind, and rain. But snow, was amazing to you. You scooped snow from the ground as Katherine threw a snowball at you and giggled. You laughed as you too threw snow at her. You heard a boy, laughing and yelling. Katherine pulled you into a run to see who made that scream. But the expression on her face meant that see knew who it was. You was jolted to a stop as Katherine pushed you back, a gold sand substance formed animals and figures. You smiled as you edged close to it. You started to play with the sand as two figures noticed you. "Hey!" one called, jumping toward you with amazing speed. You were startled and ran steps back, just then your ankle sprang pain into you. You fell into the snow and rubbed your ankle, Katherine ran toward you, placing her hand on your ankle, the pain was gone in almost a second... The boy walked toward you with cold, sharpened eyes. You stared back, expressionless, as if he didn't intimidate you. "Is this Pitch's new daughter?" He scoffed and crossed his arms, leaning against a staff dug deep into the snow. Katherine helped you up and sighed "Why are you so mad that there's a new girl here?!" Her face turned red with anger as you tried to stand up, Kathy and Jack started to argue, you sighed and sat back down, "At least it isn't cold."
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deaththekidluvr8 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014  Student General Artist
PART 2......?
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JackFgf Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014
Awesome😍😍😍😍
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melissatolkamp22 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012   Filmographer
i mean other, sorry
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VixenArtist Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Student Writer
It's Okay ^^
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melissatolkamp22 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012   Filmographer
i can't find the pther parts. can you give me links from the parts?
and its an awesome story
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:iconvixenartist:
VixenArtist Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Student Writer
[link] theres a journal panel where all the parts are at x3
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melissatolkamp22 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013   Filmographer
thank you so much!!!<3<3<3
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VixenArtist Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Student Writer
No prob :3 I'm glad you like my journal x3
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JeffTheKiller99 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
I Loooooooveeeee This!!!! What did Jack mean about 'Pitch's new daughter'?
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VixenArtist Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Student Writer
Lol, Since I've already uploaded 5 parts I'll tell you :3

It means Jack thought that "you" were Pitch's new daughter due to the fact that Kathy told him about "your" habits in wearing black and your creativity, and how you were hypnotized by the Dream Sand and that you might take a bigger liking to the nightmare dust XD
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RayneKyrian Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
oooooh! want.more.now!!
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VixenArtist Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012  Student Writer
I have 4 parts x3 Check on my journals XDD I'm updating the 4th :3
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RayneKyrian Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
oh cool!! ♥ i'll go check them out! :D
do you mind if i add them to my webiste??[link]
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VixenArtist Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012  Student Writer
Sure Cx
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RayneKyrian Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
thanks :) I've updated just updated the site ;P
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VixenArtist Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012  Student Writer
Welcome XD But I should be thanking you xD
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xxPruBen Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Professional Writer
Put paragraphs in your story. It makes it look much better and is easier on the eyes rather than a huge wall of text.
Other than that, I like it^-^
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VixenArtist Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Student Writer
Sorry o-o I get caught up in the story sometimes and just want to keep writing XD
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xxPruBen Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Professional Writer
Don't worry about it.
It's good. But try making a new paragraph whenever someone new starts talking?
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VixenArtist Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Student Writer
I tried editing it Idk XD
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:iconxxpruben:
xxPruBen Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Professional Writer
It's looks a lot better XDD
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VixenArtist Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Student Writer
Lol I hoped so :o XD! Thanks for the tip x3
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xxPruBen Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Professional Writer
No problem.
Also, once you given a good set of information, you can start anouther paragraph.
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VixenArtist Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks x3
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Conqueror-of-Hearts Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012
I wonder whose child I'll be... Tooth? Sandy? Frost? Katherine's sister? Or what, the Kangaroo? Tell me, tell me, tell me! @o@ I wanna find out!
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VixenArtist Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Student Writer
Lol! I will, soon XD I have to focus on school until Thursday i'll be home free XD
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XxnightgaunterxX Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i like it please continue it. it seems very intuiging. :3
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VixenArtist Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Student Writer
^^ Durrotay! XD
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vannachill09 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Is that Hetalia I see?
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:iconvixenartist:
VixenArtist Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Student Writer
Lul Maybe >....>
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kagomeandsesshomaru9 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist
I like it but it's a little confusing.
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VixenArtist Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Student Writer
How so :o? (I know though. I kept reading it but I can't make it... make sense. LOL.)
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kagomeandsesshomaru9 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist
Don't worry I do that sometime in my stories too sometime. But I do like it. I bet it will make more sense as it goes.
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VixenArtist Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Student Writer
Yeah, right now I focused on how things are supposed to lead up to finding out who "your" dad is and what Guardian child you are X3
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kagomeandsesshomaru9 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist
Oh please be snow princess. Oh please please please be a snow princess. I will friken die if I am one.
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kagomeandsesshomaru9 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist
Eeeeeeek. ( falls out of chair)
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VixenArtist Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Student Writer
YAY!
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Pomo-chan Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
nice idea :iconfacebooklikeplz:
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VixenArtist Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Student Writer
I'm updating this on the same journal, it's easier to keep track of xD
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Pomo-chan Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
okay >w<
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VixenArtist Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you ;w;!
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Juicy-Peach Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012
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VixenArtist Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Student Writer
I'm updating it on the same journal by the way XD
Thank you ;w;
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